The Royal Pet Store

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Throughout your life there has probably been an experience you were either very dissatisfied with or extremely satisfied with. It could be a hotel you stayed at; a product you bought, such as a microwave oven; or a service you received, such as a car wash or a server at a restaurant. Write a one paragraph letter of complaint or praise to the company/person/manufacturer of the experience and describe the causes and/or effects of the experience. Your answer should consist of a well-developed paragraph, which means your first sentence should answer the question(s) (i.e., topic sentence), and the following sentences should support the topic sentence. The paragraph should be unified and coherent with specific supporting details or examples from the story. The sentences should be clear, concise, and arranged in a logical order. Transitions, pronouns, and repetition should be used to provide coherence. The paragraph should follow a cause and effect format. As you participate in this Module′s Discussion, please, keep in mind that in order to receive points for your post and the replies, you should make sure to follow all of the requirements set for it. For example, all posts and replies must be submitted by the due dates; adhere to the prompt and all of its elements, such as point of view, formatting; finally, in your replies, comment on the very specific aspects of writing you have learned about in Module 1, 2, and 3. Please, read and respond to all the posts and replies, including mine for further guidance and examples. Your paragraph should be well-developed, which means you need a topic sentence, supporting sentences, and a concluding sentence (clincher). The paragraph should be unified and coherent with specific supporting details or examples for support. It should provide sentence variety (simple, compound, and complex sentences). The sentences should be clear, concise, and arranged in a logical order. Transitional words and phrases should be used to provide coherence. As you respond to three of your peers, please, focus on addressing the concepts you have studied in this and the previous modules, such as coherence, unity, transitions, sentence variety, paragraph structure, parallel structure, and be as specific and detailed in your responses as possible, quoting specific sections or pointing to them in the peers′ writings in order to be as helpful with your critique as possible. In order to address all the above mentioned concepts, these replies need to be substantial and clear, so just a couple of sentences will not suffice here. Think of each reply as a well developed paragraph and illustrated paragraph. PLEASE, BOLD YOUR TOPIC SENTENCE AND DOUBLE SPACE YOUR WRITING. DO NOT USE ANY OUTSIDE SOURCES FOR ANY OF THE WRITINGS IN THIS CLASS UNLESS SPECIFICALLY ASKED TO.
One paragraph per response
Start with I agree or disagree with …