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Essay #2 is due at the end of this week. In your initial post this week, you should provide your next draft of Essay #2. Then, respond in detail to the drafts of at least 2 other classmates, using the questions below for evaluating as your guide:Which sentence states the main idea (thesis) of the essay? Please explain how it is or is not clear. Where is it placed, and is its placement appropriate? What additional details could be included to help you better understand the essay? What is missing or unclear?Are the details covered in a logical sequence? Which ones, if any, seem out of place?What part of the essay is most memorable? Why?How do the transitions, such as “furthermore,” “for example,” and “next,” used to help the ideas in the paper flow logically? If they do not, or are missing, which ones would be useful or need to be changed?How does the author provide the reader with a sense of completion at the end? If completion is missing, what suggestions do you have?What kind of grammatical errors, if any, are evident in the essay?What final suggestions do you have for the author?Please use the questions above and answer each question for the drafts that you evaluate. This way, the writer will have thorough and helpful feedback for revision of the draft.Information abou the for the essay and what it should be about. You are more than welcome to change it.The Introduction Of Probation into the Justice System.·         Probationo   History of Probation/Introductiono   Anticipation of program outcomeo   Alternative to probation·         Paroleo   Effects on the justice systemo   Strategies put in place o   Statisticso   Recidivism·         Corrections care and treatment Plano   Discuss role and responsibilities of correctionso   Discuss role and responsibilities of probation/parole officerso   Transitioning back into the community·         Individual theories of Parole in the Justice systemo   Pros and cons to the programo   Psychological effects on victimso   Victims input·          Future planso   Program continuanceo   New programs2017-03-09 10:09Newhey yeah i am available2017-03-10 03:25Newanswer is ready essay in MLA formatDisplaying messages 1 – 3 of 3Copyright © 2015 HomeworkMarket.com. All rights reserved. HomeworkMarket.com does not claim copyright on questions and answers posted on the site.Uploading copyrighted material is not allowed. Refer to our for more information.HomeworkMarket.com takes full responsibility for intangible goods purchased on our site up to the paid amountPublicLoad More Messages20:44kcarter40 just posted this $7.00 homework: ‘discussion’. here’s the link 20:44guest… if you are serious then give out that work20:46Guest-1489194455lol dont pressure me into getting scammed20:46Guest-1489194455i am choosing wisely20:46Allow me to assist you with your homework, I’m an expert and only deliver quality and plagiarism free work within the stipulated time. I have the ability and experience to work on every possible niche. Kindly accord me the chance to help you. Thank you in advance as you review my profilehttps://20:46definitely20:47For quality ,100% plagiarism free( turnitin report attached) , A+s work , ping me . kindly check reviews rating .20:48I do have 10 qus in Physics I’m looking for a good one he can solve it in 2 hours for 10$20:49it’s online hw20:51Guest-148919445520:51hi20:51carolinaskies just posted this $25 homework: ‘For prof Ann’. here’s the link 20:51hi20:53hi20:53mometag just posted this $8 homework: ‘mgkt ‘. here’s the link Public is currently offline.Connecting…tim.writerstim.writers is currently offline.Connecting…Type and Press Enter