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I can see that you made an attempt to cite quotes throughout, but all verbatim quotes must be enclosed in quotation marks and all summaries (using all your own words) of other author’s ideas must include a citation.
1 This is basically a verbatim quote and is included in your paper without any citation. All verbatim quotes must be enclosed in quotation marks, otherwise it appears that you wrote it yourself. (Even if you summarize this process in all your own words, a citation is required, as you learned about this process from Suskie.) You wrote: It is a process that initially involves establishing clear and observable student learning goals, giving students sufficient opportunities for achiving the goals, gathering, analyzing and interpreting evidence that students meet the set goals and using the results to improve student learning. Original source: “1. Establish clear, observable expected goals for student learning. 2. Ensure that students have sufficient opportunities to achieve those goals. 3. Systematically gather, analyze, and interpret evidence of how well student learning meets those goals. 4. Use the resulting information to understand and improve student learning” (Suskie, 2018, p. 8).
2 You wrote: Assessment refers to the process of deciding what students are going to learn and ensuring they learn it.
Original Source: “Assessment is deciding what we want our students to learn and making sure they learn it” (Suskie, 2018, p. 8). There are several other areas that appear to be summaries of other authors’ work. Be sure to include citations for these. Also, be sure to include page numbers for all verbatim quotes. Before revising your paper, please review the Safe Assign report and identify all verbatim (or close to verbatim) quotes that need citations (including quotation marks).
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